Post by Alice Cullen on Oct 22, 2009 21:23:17 GMT -5
Your Name: Liz
Character's Name: Carmen Elizabeth Marie Meyer
Character's Species: Vampire
Character's Age: 17
How far have you gotten in the series?: i've read all four.
Short character description:
Carmen has long black hair that reaches the middle of her back. She has sparkling, emerald, green eyes that can stop men in their tracks. Long lashes frame these eyes and make her eyes look smoky. Her full lips are beautifully sculpted and tease men into wild fantasies. The only flaw on her face is the scar that runs from the inside of her right eye to a place behind her ear.
She is about 5’6 and 130 pounds and average build. She is normally found in jeans, a hoodie, and high boots over the jeans, helps to hide the dagger she keeps on her at all times because it was a gift from her grandparents, while out of school. She carries everything she needs in an old beat-up black backpack. She wears her hair in either a ponytail or pigtails, because it doesn’t take much work to put them in.
If you are not selected for this character, who else would you like to be?: Maggie.
Is there any particular reason for choosing this character? I think I could make this character more active in the story.
What characters are you currently playing, if any? None.
Sample of Writing as desired character (2+ Paragraphs):
Carmen woke up in the middle of the night to hear her parents terrified screams echoing through the house. Carmen looked towards her window it was still night barely dawn. Carmen quickly got up and ran out of her room. In their bedroom their were two things leaning over her parents the pillows and blankets were soaked with their blood. Carmen wanted to scream, tell them to get away from her parents, but nothing would come out of her mouth.
Carmen had saw this scene before, she had thought it was a nightmare, not the future to come. In the nightmare, they would turned to her, blood dripping from their mouths, their fangs elongated. They would gracefully walk toward her, a wicked grin still on their face. Carmen remembered the dream, and tried to rid herself of it. When she opened her eyes she saw the two monsters who had just killed her parents. Looking straight at her, her parents blood dripping from their mouths. Their fangs out and ready to strike again. She saw them walk towards her, but she couldn’t move, couldn’t scream. She just let them move closer and closer. Carmen knew what happened next and she was terrified. The man came closer to her and bit her in the only visible place, her neck.
~***~
Carmen woke up the next day, to find that out her parents were dead and she was an orphan. She knew she was in the hallway of her house, and she could smell the copper scent of her parents blood. Carmen knew then and there she had to run away from the only place she called home. She was thirsty and it didn’t take long to find out what she wanted.
Walking in to her bedroom she grabbed most of her stuff. Still in the long nightgown, she changed into her dress, apran, and soft leather shoes. She put all her clothes, journals and books and stuffed them into her large basket with it’s cover. She placed the basket over her elbow, opened her window and jumped out and started running toward the woods. That was the last day Carmen saw her home and the first day she was on the run from herself.
Character's Name: Carmen Elizabeth Marie Meyer
Character's Species: Vampire
Character's Age: 17
How far have you gotten in the series?: i've read all four.
Short character description:
Carmen has long black hair that reaches the middle of her back. She has sparkling, emerald, green eyes that can stop men in their tracks. Long lashes frame these eyes and make her eyes look smoky. Her full lips are beautifully sculpted and tease men into wild fantasies. The only flaw on her face is the scar that runs from the inside of her right eye to a place behind her ear.
She is about 5’6 and 130 pounds and average build. She is normally found in jeans, a hoodie, and high boots over the jeans, helps to hide the dagger she keeps on her at all times because it was a gift from her grandparents, while out of school. She carries everything she needs in an old beat-up black backpack. She wears her hair in either a ponytail or pigtails, because it doesn’t take much work to put them in.
If you are not selected for this character, who else would you like to be?: Maggie.
Is there any particular reason for choosing this character? I think I could make this character more active in the story.
What characters are you currently playing, if any? None.
Sample of Writing as desired character (2+ Paragraphs):
Carmen woke up in the middle of the night to hear her parents terrified screams echoing through the house. Carmen looked towards her window it was still night barely dawn. Carmen quickly got up and ran out of her room. In their bedroom their were two things leaning over her parents the pillows and blankets were soaked with their blood. Carmen wanted to scream, tell them to get away from her parents, but nothing would come out of her mouth.
Carmen had saw this scene before, she had thought it was a nightmare, not the future to come. In the nightmare, they would turned to her, blood dripping from their mouths, their fangs elongated. They would gracefully walk toward her, a wicked grin still on their face. Carmen remembered the dream, and tried to rid herself of it. When she opened her eyes she saw the two monsters who had just killed her parents. Looking straight at her, her parents blood dripping from their mouths. Their fangs out and ready to strike again. She saw them walk towards her, but she couldn’t move, couldn’t scream. She just let them move closer and closer. Carmen knew what happened next and she was terrified. The man came closer to her and bit her in the only visible place, her neck.
~***~
Carmen woke up the next day, to find that out her parents were dead and she was an orphan. She knew she was in the hallway of her house, and she could smell the copper scent of her parents blood. Carmen knew then and there she had to run away from the only place she called home. She was thirsty and it didn’t take long to find out what she wanted.
Walking in to her bedroom she grabbed most of her stuff. Still in the long nightgown, she changed into her dress, apran, and soft leather shoes. She put all her clothes, journals and books and stuffed them into her large basket with it’s cover. She placed the basket over her elbow, opened her window and jumped out and started running toward the woods. That was the last day Carmen saw her home and the first day she was on the run from herself.